Maria Carolina Rozas, Crescent Moon Water Wheel
(Digital - Beginner)
Interest: 6 Composition: 6.7 Technique: 6 Total: 18.7
- I like the use of the trees and sky to frame the historic buildings and your exposure is very good. Suggest that if you had gotten lower on the ground, you could have eliminated most of the sidewalk (a distraction) and cropped from both the right and left to really use your dominant trees.
- Great potential but buildings OOF. I would have included more foreground and used it to clone out sidewalk. Some noticeable CA.
- I like the delicate quality of the snow on the branches compared to the saturated color of the wet wood. The path, devoid of snow, leads the viewers eye to the water wheel which is well placed in the composition. The lines of the fence and the curb enhance the composition as well. The image suffers only from the lack of light.