John Gafford, These iPhone Cameras are Awesome
(Print - Creative)
Interest: 6.7 Composition: 5.7 Technique: 5.3 Total: 17.7
- Initial impression is an interesting image. It seems to be a composite of several shots with some artifact at the margins from how the parts were superimposed. The position of the repeated image in the iPhone might be better if moved more to the lower left (also gives less arm in the image). The repositioning would tend to draw the viewer into the scene a little more.
- This is a clever idea for a composite image! However, the composition might be stronger if the phone were not centered, but instead were placed lower in the frame, thus partially covering the distracting stone in the foreground. Also, there is a noticeable white halo around the ruins against the sky.
- This is a clever idea. But it is very obviously a composite. The light on the arm is coming from the same direction as in the landscape but it is a different quality of light. The edges of the hand and arm are too sharp. There is a white line around the columns suggesting either a pasted in sky or over sharpening. The original image without the hand has a lot of potential, especially with that dramatic sky.