Pat Scott, California Dreaming
(Digital - Intermediate)
Interest: 6.8 Composition: 7 Technique: 6.8 Total: 20.5
Exposure: ISO:100 f/8 1/4000 35 mm
- This is a well-executed silhouette image of a man gazing out to sea toward the end of the day. He is well-placed in the frame with a number of lines leading the viewer's eye to him. The patch of light directly below the man is somewhat distracting and could be fixed in post processing.
- any comments I make would be nitpicking. Unique and wondeful photo
- Evokes a sense of calmness. Different perspective and a couple of lighter elements might have enhanced the mood.
- Effective use of silhouette. Consider changing aspect ratio by cropping part of bottom which is pure black. Composition very nice with dream-like observer on right 1/3 line.