Pam Holmes, Bright Eyed & Bushy Tailed
(Print - Color)
Interest: 5 Composition: 6 Technique: 5.7 Total: 16.7
Exposure: ISO:4000 f/8 1/1000 461 mm
- Fascinating animals. All four feet off the ground indicates the foreground antelope is running. This photo would be improved if the running antelope was alone in the scene. The other two animals are serious distractions
- Nice idea for the triangle - but background WilderB is distracting. The crop seems too tight and focus is an issue. Perhaps a wider crop or more tightly cropped @ the main beast ?
- This must have been fun to shoot! Lighting although flat is enjoyable. While 3 itmes in an image can make trangles which are good for compositional flow, in this case, the 3 wildebeasts intersect with each other and interfere with each other. The improvement could be achieved by waiting and getting only 1 animal. Good idea, just needs a bit of compositional refinement going forward.