2019 - March

Roger Kiel, Winter at West Fork

*** Third Place *** (Print - Mono)
Interest: 6 Composition: 6.3 Technique: 6.7 Total: 19
Exposure: Unavailable

- A beautiful winter scene. I think cropping the bottom from the base of the right railing across the bottom would dramatically improve the composition.
- Nice capture. Gloss casts a green haze on image.Perhaps a Mat paper ? Some halos visable. A tighter crop on the bottom might alter the perspective and angle ?
- Vanishing lines are nice - especially in this b&w image. The composition based on the photographer's location seems to be a bit off balance. Try this effect with the left side being MORE accentuated by standing closer to the right rail or crop the left side to make the starting point of the bridge rail more even - right now it almost feels like you were having a hard time deciding whether to be more or less extreme. Go for it! Go more extreme AND shoot more balanced - see which one you like best. Very nice idea here.