Becky Griffin, Like a Painting
(Digital - Advanced)
Interest: 6.8 Composition: 6 Technique: 6 Total: 18.8
Exposure: ISO:400 f/11 1/250 227 mm
- Nice colors on boat. Need better composition to get whole boat.Pink splotches in water>address in post.
- You have a nice quiet image of a boat at the dock. Good idea. The light is soft and the image is properly exposed and sharp. I find it was cropped too tight for my liking. There is a merger on the left side with the boat side and frame. The same for the top. While I like the image as it is, I think it could be improved with a looser framing keeping the borders free of mergers.
- Love the vibrant colors and it IS like a painting, except for the fact that outside parts of the boat are eliminated - it looks unfinished. The water, white boat & the dock have rainbow colors that need correcting. Inclusion of the scattered oars is not only a great addition, but adds some mystery.